[speeddemon619]

They lack punch...

I would agree, but, maybe you are goin for something subtle. Idk what your looking for? but i think maybe a little bit more accent in the bricks and other grey areas and it would pop alot more, even if it were a bit of black between the bricks or something... throw a little more definition

 

[Thumper273]

diggin the green man, you sell any of your work? Im looking to customize some shroud graphics for the 110.

 

[magiksc]

I think these are amazing. They have more punch than anything I have seen JJW produce so I wouldn't really listen to him. I like how they have been put together and I would agree that the blue/green look the best. I would definitely buy a set of these

Joeskin just posted his bike with a set of Troy Lee JJW graphics and they where way clean.

http://www.planetminis.com/f15/done-check-out-107055.html



At least JJW's stuff doesn't look like a shirt from the Gap or the Buckle.

 

[50wy]

Red and blue not so much. Neon green is the way to go! What about adding a hint of pink or another color like orange? Without that they still look so cool!

 

[Cameron_Rad]

K here is my opinion:



1st: Add some lines. Some aggression to it. Something that helps portray movement.

2nd: Lay off the vectors. Vectors should be used in moderation. Right now it looks like you got something from designious or go media and are just throwing it together. If you are using vectors try to incorporate it better.

3rd: Choose which road you are going to go with. Either illustration or graphic(lines). It seems like now you are stuck in between. It just looks too busy. Either put emphasis on making the graphic(lines) pop or the illustration.

4rd: Are you designing in CMYK? It looks like you are using RGB as your colors. If so it's going to look bad in print. Also add some contrast. Maybe add a second color or use stronger and weaker values of the same color.



That's about it.

 

[DC50]

They lack punch...

does hey work for you?



OH SNAP!

 

[69z72r]

try pink. lol. i dont like the red although the blue and green arnt bad.

or just keep the green and use some orange and pink accents.

you need to make the skyline stand out more on the bottom imo.

Maybe some sponsors names on the brincks??? idk what that would look like.

what is below the stallion?? that is out of place looking.

not bad though, def better than i could do.

 

[Thumper273]

I would sport those white and green shroud graphics right now on my 110. I have white plastics and need a little color to spiff it up.



how much?